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you have been the sky
from where i took
the color blue
whose moods were reflected
in the color of
my sea
and whose atmosphere
was the interpreter
of sunlight

when will i return
to the earth
walk among things as they are
and not the things
as they are defined by a certain light
when will the garden of the ordinary
call me back
touch my shoulder
whisper me back to my name
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[edit: revised on january 29, 2008]
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Mood: Love ~Lovespoon Mar 22, 2009  Professional Writer
Cool.

"Interpreter of Light" suggested title.

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:iconpaperfences:
The depth and defiant necessity of your language is breathtaking. The words seem to ungulate with envious rapture. Simply brilliant.
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:iconequivoque:
thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment
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:iconmothfly:
a story full of charm and longing... reading your poems is like reading books... only faster and with much more emotions :love:
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`shell4art Feb 1, 2008  Professional Photographer
The book of your images and words would be astonishing! Bravo!
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:iconequivoque:
thanks. i would love to do that. not likely to happen. i learned from chris the reality of publishing photos and how much the artist has to contribute financially to the process!
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:iconashenden:
Lovely! Your world view, as demonstrated by your photographs, is reflected in these poems you write.
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:iconashenden:
you're welcome!
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*99thbone Jan 30, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
let an imagination see what your mind is able to say -- and forever know -- that this simple colour -- this simple creation -- will never be forgotten -- later days
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